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31 December 2008 @ 09:16 am
The Naked and the Nude (#120 Naked)  
Title: The Naked and the Nude (#120 Naked)
Author: ladygray99

Pairing: Charlie/Ian
Rating: PG
Word Count: 200
Warning: D/s
Summary: The first order is a statement.
Notes: Written for numb3rs100 . A bit more Charlie/Ian D/s. I’ve decided all my Charlie/Ian D/s drabbles are basically one ‘verse and there are five of them now. The ‘verse is called A Silk Pillow and it’s here. This is being written out of order obviously as the bunnies and prompts come. I think I nicked the title from something I read in high school but I can’t remember what. Feedback please.
Beta: riverotter1951 


The Naked and the Nude (#120 Naked)


The first order was phrased as a statement.

“I will see you naked.”

The gun went first, then the badge.

The shirt was efficiently unbuttoned. It was not a strip. If Charlie had wanted a strip he would have ordered one.

Shirt folded and set aside.

Boots next, laces neatly tucked in placed the same way they sat at the foot of his bed in basic.

Pants removed and folded, tucked out of the way. Ian was sure he wouldn’t be putting them on for a while.

Socks were removed, tucked into boots. The floor of the cabin was cold.

Underwear last. Ian did not hesitate. He would not show uncertainty. His hands would not falter exposing himself. He kept his face neutral as he became nude.

The professor stepped around him, ran fingers along his hip, his thigh. Let his fingers linger at the small of his back. They ghosted across the tattoo on his arm, slid across his bare chest. A few simple touches cataloged ever inch of exposed skin.

“Very nice, you look good nude. But I said I will see you naked. And I will. It will just take a little time to get you there.”
Negotiations and Love Songs / A Silk Pillow
 
 
 
fredbassettfredbassett on December 30th, 2008 08:29 pm (UTC)
Ooooh, yummy!!! Very yummy!!!
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 08:29 pm (UTC)
:-) Thank you.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on December 30th, 2008 08:51 pm (UTC)
OH MY! Very nice! Naked vs nude, especially for Ian, is particularly appealing.

I'm really enjoying this verse. Thanks for helping my inner C/I muse perk up again. ;-)
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
My pleasure. I always like seeing C/I from you.
ninou1ninou1 on December 30th, 2008 09:27 pm (UTC)
He he, last line a killer, go Charlie !!!
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 09:31 pm (UTC)
:-) I always struggle with last lines.
devon99 on December 30th, 2008 09:40 pm (UTC)
Okay, I told you before that I wasn't so fond of this pairing.

I think you are changing my mind.

I like the dynamics of this relationship.

*more*
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 10:03 pm (UTC)
I've always seen these two as two sides of the same coin. They're both tops in their fields in ways that intimidate other and isolate them from all but a select few. I'm working on a long C/I story that'll be in a similar flavor to Vignettes but they're both complex characters so it's taking time.
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 10:05 pm (UTC)
oh and I should pimp sniper_voodoo the Charlie/Ian com.
devon99 on December 30th, 2008 10:09 pm (UTC)
Many thanks:)
Cynthia: CD Strip by darkangel416121trackmind on December 30th, 2008 09:51 pm (UTC)
“Very nice, you look good nude. But I said I will see you naked. And I will. It will just take a little time to get you there.”

Oh very nice ending! Nice build up, too.
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 30th, 2008 10:03 pm (UTC)
Thank you. I always struggle with endings.
Devo79devo79 on December 30th, 2008 11:07 pm (UTC)
It's funny how there's a big difference between being nude and really naked.
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 31st, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
Ian's going to find out just how big a difference.
rubynye on December 31st, 2008 08:37 pm (UTC)
Oooooh. You're turning Charlie's mathematical precision into a positive kink, and I like it.
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 31st, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)
A good Dom has precision and Charlie's got that in buckets.
foolartist02: charlie thinking bwfoolartist02 on December 31st, 2008 10:56 pm (UTC)
Oh! Nice.
ladygray99ladygray99 on December 31st, 2008 11:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you.
(Anonymous) on January 2nd, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
long in the tongue
highest praise for quality bittersweet chocolate.
that's what came to mind as i sat back and savoured this piece.
thank you for sharing so graciously
ladygray99ladygray99 on January 2nd, 2009 04:51 am (UTC)
Re: long in the tongue
Well I will deffinetly take that complement. thank you.
randomrubixcuberandomrubixcube on June 3rd, 2010 08:38 pm (UTC)
Awesome, Ian doesn't waste time, does what he's told.
And the ending is strong. Charlie gets what he wants, even if Ian doesn't know how to give it. Yet.
ladygray99ladygray99 on June 6th, 2010 04:27 pm (UTC)
Ian will learn. Ian's got a lot of learning to do.