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31 March 2008 @ 08:39 am
Vignettes - Take 2...or more  
Title: Take 2…or more
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Colby/Charlie
Rating: FRAO
Disclaimer: Belongs to other people, not me.
Warnings/Squicks: Smut! Smutty, smutty smut! (or is that more of a selling point than a warning?)
Summary: Colby and Charlie have sex, again, and again, and again, and again.
Previous chapters: Part of the Vignettes ‘verse after Burn Me.
Notes: Feedback as always is a form of love.  It’s been way too long since I’ve written for Vignettes so forgive me if the tone is a little rusty. 
Beta(s):None, so feel free to fix and nit pick



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completely corrupted.: misbehavelacking_purity on April 3rd, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
Great story, excellent writing - you are just amazing. Keep up the great work.
ladygray99ladygray99 on April 3rd, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
Glad you enjoyed them. Welcome to the fun. :-)
devon99 on April 4th, 2008 10:17 pm (UTC)
Fab stuff. I love your vignettes series, there's such warmth in your writing within this verse, not too mention the sex is damn HOT!
ladygray99ladygray99 on April 4th, 2008 10:20 pm (UTC)
Well thank you. :-) More sex coming down the line next week.
laura_trekkielaura_trekkie on January 29th, 2009 12:30 am (UTC)
Very nice! I liked the different tones each take had- fast, slow, 'anyone could walk in'. All very hot, but with a variety of sweet, lazy, awkward and funny moments too :).

ladygray99ladygray99 on January 29th, 2009 01:39 am (UTC)
Thank you. It's not actually my favorite. I was a little rusty when I wrote it.
(Anonymous) on January 16th, 2010 11:26 pm (UTC)
What to do when you've finished the latest update -- and thank you very much for that -- but to reread from the beginning.

I love Take 5, when they change from being good friends with benefits that can be explained by the circumstances to a real relationship.
ladygray99ladygray99 on January 17th, 2010 12:46 pm (UTC)
I have a hard time getting through it from the beginning these days. This one was actually oddly difficult to write. I'd written a throw away line about how they got back together again after the first night but at the time I didn't put a lot of thought into what it meant.
emmatheancienemmatheancien on January 17th, 2010 02:53 pm (UTC)
Well, well, well the boys have been busy XD It'es really well written, and feells realistic. But as a romantic personn I admit I prefer the last take, it was sweet, and calm and beautiful. Not that I don't like the others takes, still the last is mt favorite :)
ladygray99ladygray99 on January 17th, 2010 02:54 pm (UTC)
This isn't my favorite of the vignettes I've got to say. It just didn't come out quite right. But I agree the last bit probubly came out the best.
emmatheancienemmatheancien on January 18th, 2010 10:42 pm (UTC)
It's not easy to write NC17, I talk from experience. At the beginning it was ok, but the more I wrote, the more it was harder.

But you did a really good job with it.
ladygray99ladygray99 on January 19th, 2010 02:20 am (UTC)
I'm usually okay writing smut but I'd hadn't done it for a while when I wrote this and I had written in vignettes 'verse for a while either. Then I rushed it. Oh well. As long as one bit works.
randomrubixcube: N3 - Colbyrandomrubixcube on May 31st, 2010 11:59 pm (UTC)
This line just totally had me XD " There was a much longer stream of mumbles that Colby took as ‘Shut up and enjoy the fruits of my higher education.’ "

But all in all, so much sexxy smut, gotta love it :p
ladygray99ladygray99 on June 1st, 2010 04:36 am (UTC)
You know I really wasn't happy with this one when I posted it. I almost didn't. It just didn't feel right but I have to say over the years I've warmed up to it.