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17 December 2007 @ 08:02 am
Whitman ‘verse Master List  

Whitman ‘verse Master List

WARNING:

Here there be dragons and darkness. Here is BDSM, self abuse, violence, and angst.

AN: If you can handle it I think it’s the best stuff I’ve ever written.

The Modern Man I Sing - Charlie/Colby

Sing My Body Electric - Charlie/Colby  (Winner at numb3rs_awards 2009 Best Slash, Drama)

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From Pent-up, Aching Rivers - Charlie/Colby  (actually no angst here) :-)

A Woman Waits for Me - Charlie/Colby, Don/OFC, Megan/Larry, Alan/OFC (Winner at numb3rs_awards 2009 Best Slash Novella, Original Character, Martin Sherwood )

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39

The Delicate Brothers -ACT 1 - (Charlie/Colby, Don/OFC, Alan/OFC, Ian/OMC/OFC, Megan/Larry)

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17

Whitman 'verse drabbles - Written for

numb3rs100

All The Way (Charlie/OMC)
A Boat Named the Lady Marie (Charlie, OFC, OMC)
Crime Scene Photos (Charlie)


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Tamanna: charlie equationsswingandswirl on March 11th, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
Wow. Just wow.

*has been sitting at her computer for the past fifteen minutes, trying to regain some semblance of coherency*

This is just... amazing. I was initially going to post a comment to each part, but then I got so hooked I just couldn't stop reading, even to squee. *looks sheepish*

I'll be honest with you- I'm not much fan of BDSM except in PWPs, because it tends to be either horifically OOC or just mindless porn, but this? This is dark and brutal and honest and just so REAL it makes me want to cry. I adore how you've chosen to push the boundaries rather than take the usual path of it just being fun and games, and yet, you've made the BDSM just a part of Charlie and Colby's love story and not the story itself. Brava.

Your characterisation here was just amazing- I could *see* David, Dylan, Rob and Judd in my head, almost like this was an actual episode. You've nailed their voices perfectly, as well as their dynamic with each other. I especially adore your Colby- you've done a brilliant job of portraying his disgust/misery/fascination, and that conversation with Don in Sing My Body Electric was a work of art. Also, major points for actually making Dr. Goldman and Bradford interesting 3D characters. I want them for my doctor and shrink!

My favourite part about this verse, though, is that while this is an undeniably dark story, you've managed to infuse it with humour and passion and just plain fun- I must have laughed out loud at least three times over the line about Colby not knowing that he had mustard until Charlie ate it , and the office rumour mill made me fall out of my chair. CalSci brainwashing experiment indeed. *still giggling*

BTW, I noticed you mentioned needing a beta on account of SPAG issues. If you want, I'd be happy to help- I'm a journalism major and being anal-retentive about crap like that is my job, so it'll be nice to put it to fun use for a change. *grins* If you're interested, let me know!
ladygray99ladygray99 on March 11th, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
"I could *see* David, Dylan, Rob and Judd in my head, almost like this was an actual episode."
That would be one heck of an episode. I'm glad I could get the voices right for you. That's always my bench mark for writing dialog, what does it sound like in the actors voice?
And as always I'm very honored that you were willing to tackle a story that normally you'd avoid. I avoid a lot of BDSM stories for many of the same reasons.
Also glad I could give you a laugh.
I'll keep you in mind for a beta for the next story. it however has stalled out at about 58,000 words and 131 pages. *sigh* I'm working on it though.
Slowly
Very slowly.
It's going to be a kinda heavy Don story really. I got the boys to a reasonably happy place in the last three so I'm kicking Don down the Whitman 'verse rabbit hole for a little stress and misery. *eg*